Marcus De La Cruz- (Deceased)

Name: Marcus De La Cruz

Nicknames: None

Age: 36

Race: Lycan (Garou)

Auspecies: Ahroun

Origin: Benedictus

Birthdate: 9th Sun of the 10th Shine

Eye Colour: Blue

Hair Color: Black

Height: 6'8

Weight: 205

Skin Tone: Dark Tan

Build: Muscle, they come out in all the right places.

Inkings or Piercings: Tattoo on right arm, refer to picture below.

Appearance and Attire: Refer to picture below.

Personality: Marcus is a kind man, willing to help others if they are in trouble. Yet if threatened or angered, he is a force not to be underestimated. For he will put you down. Although, he is smart enough not to talk back to those of higher authority.

Dominant Trait: Kindness

Description of Home: He has a nice wooden house in Benedictus, not to shabby. Your basic middle class home. It has fine furniture and decorations.

Sense of Humour: He loves a good laugh every once in awhile, to ease the tension.

Habits: He tends to trace small cricles when he is thinking.

Talents: He is good with his swords. He is also very strong.

Hobbies/Past Times: He likes to run through forests to exercise.

Sexuality: Straight

Relationship Status: Single

Social Class: Middle

Diseases/Problems/Disabilities/Addictions: None

Educational Background: The basics

Work Experience: Tracking, hunting

Occupation: Tracker

Parents Names and Occupations: Hans and Catherine De La Cruz. It is uncertain to what his father did but his mother worked at one of the local inns. It was a top coin one too.

Family: Parents death caused due to vampire attack. He has a sister, Amelia De La Cuz that he has been searching for.

Alliances: None at the moment

Philosophy on Life: He thinks that you should live the day as if its your last, take a risk, take a chance. It's all in good fun.

Life Quote: "Without fear, there cannot be courage."

Religion: Garou, I guess.

Weaponry: His two swords, refer to picture below.

Favourite Weapon: Swords

Inventory: Swords, bag of gold.

Other Biographical Remarks: He is uncertain of his lycan nature, he has a handle on it. Just isn't certain of what to think of it.

History: He was born to a good family, his mother and father cherished their children. They were never harmful or anything, always paye their taxes and the guards left them alone. One day, when Amelia was sleeping in her crib. Vampires attacked the house, in an effort to save her infant daughter. Catherine put Amelia into a basket and sent her down stream. Hoping that one day she would see her again. They were able to fend off the vampires, but Hans was injured severely. He survived and live awhile longer before finally succombing to his wounds. Marcus's mother died shortly after, her dying wish was for him to find his sister. He has been on the search ever since. He won't talk about how he became a lycan for he resents a little.

Marcus:


Lupus:


Crinos:

I'm not sure about the Auspecies, from what I understand. It'd be difficult for him to be so young. You'll have to see what Jai says

I'm going to change it anyways.

Accepted.

I disagree with his personality and dominant trait.

The era of the Rp would not allow him to be rude to authority, or anyone of a higher station.
you've given him a contradicting nature.
"It doesn't matter if you are a king, you insult him, you get your ass kicked. But he does have respect for those of higher status than him though, if they deserve it."

Of the Era, anyone majorly higher than himself would be respected. He wouldn't respect some and not other, lest they were corrupt or whatnot, but even then he would need ot think twice on acting on it.

Another point is how you stated that he is well muscular to the extent of "you wouldn't want to piss him off."
People of such large muscle mass, don't tend to be very acrobatic.
Just to note.

Other than that, I find no fault with the character.
On an IC note, as a lycan he would be disregarded by many, considering he's young. Showing physical prowess will only get you so far; he will often be referred to as 'cub' or something similar, and possibly be mocked for his nickname.
No need to change it or anything, I'm just giving you the heads up.